I don't understand REDO

EDIT: 12/10/14 Fixed a bunch of errors + changed his hair color a little. Old version: gyazo.com/d33cd26abecc42c0b1f6…


Finished and redone drawing of this six year old drawing: 
Sketch: 
I made a poll a few months ago asking fellow deviants which old image of Letticus I should redraw first. This won the poll: taralen.deviantart.com/journal…
I tried to add some kind of simple backdrop, but nothing I did looked right and ended up being distracting, so I settled with a transparent background!

_{Letticus Sativa is from Paean of the New Dawn | Oh Princess! © Taralen | SNOUP}